Last changed on
Fri November 8, 2024 at 7:11 AM EST
Second year parent judge.
CONGRESS:
My Congress comments should have speech/PO criteria ratings based on National Forensic League training guidance between 3-6, entered as you're speaking so you have some minimal feedback on how I decided on final score for individual speech and eventual ranking. 3=Mediocre, 4=Proficient, 5=Excellent, 6=Superior
Examples: Originality of Thought, Organization and Unity, Evidence and Logic, Delivery.
I also attempt to score (in comments) how you handle questioning of your speech.
If time allows, I attempt to give constructive written feedback in the comments as well. Overall rankings take into account your entire performance in the round.
SPEECH:
The most polished student in a round with an easy to follow and interesting presentation (while also satisfying rules/objective/criteria of particular event) generally rises to the top of the rankings in my rounds. Please don't rush your introductions/teasers as it really helps me follow the rest of the piece.
I've also decided to try and assign speaker points to three main categories in your feedback depending on the speech event. This is to hopefully give you some minimal feedback indicating the elements of your piece that may have room for improvement. I always attempt to give detailed comments as well, but time doesn't always allow for this.
Points listed in comments do not necessarily average or add up to your final speaker point score.
27=Average, 28=Above Average, 29=Excellent, 30=Superior
From the National Forensic League:
INTERPRETATION (DI, DUO, HI)
Characterization
Is each character well-developed? Is each character relatable? Does a character’s response seem believable given the situation being portrayed?
Blocking
Can you tell what the performer is doing in the scene? Is it clear what character(s) they are playing? Is the movement motivated?
Cutting
Do you understand what is happening? Is the story line easy to follow? Does the sequence of events make sense?
PROGRAM ORAL INTERPRETATION
Programming
Were at least two of the three genresof literature (Poetry/Prose/Drama)used in the program? Did all of theliterature contribute to the theme orargument? Did the flow of theperformance make sense? Was therea balance among genres in theperformance?
Blocking
Can you tell what the performer wasdoing in each scene? Was it clearwhat selection the performer wasusing in each section? Did theperformer maintain control of themanuscript at all times? Was themovement motivated in theperformance?
Characterization
Did each selection have distinct andengaging characters? Did theperformance match the genre (e.g.,did the performer emphasize poeticelements when performing a Poetryselection)? Was the performancedynamic?
INFORMATIVE SPEAKING
Relevance:
Is the topic timely? Is the thesis clearly established? Does the delivery assist in establishing the importance of the topic?
Relatability:
Can the audience relate to the topic? Is the delivery personable? Does the speaker establish how others are impacted by the topic? Does the speaker do a good job informing?
Originality:
Does the speaker address the topic in a unique, inventive way? Are the supporting examples new and interesting?
EXTEMPORANEOUS SPEAKING
Argumentation and Analysis
Is the student directly answering the question? Does the student develop justifications for their ideas and establish the significance of their points? Have they established a clear understanding of the topic area?
Source Consideration
Does the speaker offer a variety of sources? Are the sources provided credible? Are appropriate citations used when citing a source?
Delivery
Is the student using voice, movement, and expression effectively? Is the speaker confident? Is there consistent eye contact? Is the volume appropriate?
ORIGINAL ORATORY
Importance
Is the topic significant? Is the thesis clearly established? Does the delivery assist in establishing the importance of the topic?
Relatability
Can the audience relate to the topic? Is the delivery personable? Does the speaker establish how others are impacted by their topic? Is the rhetoric of the speech inclusive?
Originality
Does the speaker address the topic in a unique, inventive way? Are the supporting examples new and interesting?
STORYTELLING
Tone
Does the performer's voice alignwith the type of story they'vechosen to tell? Is it clear this storywould be suitable for children tohear?
Expressiveness
Does the presenter bring thewords to life using effectivetechniques to convey appropriateemotion? Do the presenter’sfacial expressions aid the overalldelivery of the presentation?Does the presenter seem engagedin the literature?
Relatability
Is the presenter delivering thestory in a manner that wouldengage young children? Does thepresenter effectively establish aconnection to the audience? Iseye contact used to engage theaudience?